Could you please correct my written English?

You have great English but there's 2 errors only. Possiblem is not a word. It comes up red underlined when you type it. The word is possible. Often times should have a space inbetween. Other than that I love your term about Lunar New Year's Day. I assume that would mean the beginning of the new Chinese year. It made my reading more enjoyable. Actually I may have read yours too fast and it's been determined there are far more than 2 errors. Maybe 3 or 4 or more.